Thursday, February 17, 2011
Writing technique used in page 70
It was a day so full of anticipation that even the lazy 15 year old popped out of bed wide awake. Even the dog knew something was up. His ears perked up slightly more than usual as the family got ready for school. There was a slight bounce in his step as the kid got out of his car to go to class. The day was full of anticipation. The math test that everyone was worried about didn't phase the kid; he wasn't thinking about it. The bell rang.
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Honestly, I think you did this better that the author did. I love the very first line, because it shows how out of the ordinary that day is. This is great.
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